Charlie II

At the time he hates both the crewmen and Machevel. By all means hate him, but spell his name correctly. ;) Mach a vel And mate, no hard feelings, yeah? ...

Machavell Labour Slave "Govern a ship? You ignorant wretch!" Machavell could see his plans all falling apart. "I, for one, will not risk my life so foolishly!" He was careful ...

I'm afraid the general consensus points to it being irrational and impossible to storm the ship at this moment. Plus, factor in the fact that we do not yet know ...

Machavell Labour Slave "Impetuous fool," Machavell spat, his curse a whisper that carried throughout the cells. "Incompetent dolt. You call that a plan ?" Deaven ignored him. He was busy, ...

I like the contract. It has style! :P Also, to add to Jiggity's comprehensive list of questions: when do we begin? Charlie

Machavell Race: Human Class: Traitor Alignment: Neutral Age: 31 Height: 6' 2" Weight: 160lbs Eyes: Grey Hair: Black, a thin moustache Hits: Opportunities for self-gain, other peoples’ misfortune. Mi

Thank you, all three of you, for your honest (and speedy :D ) critiques. I agree with you, the prologue is pretty much my twisted version of the beginning to ...

-- A FEW THINGS I SHOULD MENTION -- 1. My name is Death. 2. You will meet me one day. 3. This is not my story. The first is simple, ...

Blood, bones and feathers, fall from my back. I'm not that angel anymore that could, walk through halls of fire and caverns of ice, and still hold His head high. ...

YWS is popular with young people that, for the most, won't be able to spend money very easily on the Internet. I'm sure you recognise this, so this idea would ...

*tips hat* I'm here as requested. Firstly, I'd like to take the time to commend zankoku_na_tenshi . Look through the grammar and punctuation corrections that she's made and learn from ...

xxfourthelement Yayness, I got round to your piece! It was a pleasure to read, the critique was maybe a little harsh, but I figure you'll be thankful when you've made ...

*tips hat* Good evening. You posted in my thread, you get a critique. Voila. 1. Opening chapter blues Mmmk, so it's your first chapter. What you don't want to do ...

Good day YWSers! I have free time. I can critique. All I lack is self-motivation! :P So! To get around this nasty obstacle, just tell me what you want critiquing. ...

*nods* Well done Jab-jab-jabbity-jabber! ;) About time too! Charlie